Kate Atkinson’s Normal Rules Don’t Apply: too much whimsy

I first read Kate Atkinson back in the mid-1990s. Her debut novel, Behind the Scenes at the Museum, had just been published and I loved it instantly. It felt special and quite distinctive, and it made such an impression on me that it is one of the few novels I can still remember reading. And I obviously wasn’t alone: it went on to win the Whitbread (which later became the Costa) prize in 1995. What attracted me was her ability to mix the detail of everyday reality with the cosmic and the fantastic, and to deliver it all in a playful, conversational voice.

And that same voice and that same modus operandi is still here in Normal Rules Don’t Apply. In ‘The Void’ she imagines a world in which at certain moments anyone not safely indoors is struck dead on the spot. Our heroine Genevieve is saved only because she is safely inside Waitrose, taking refuge from the rain and toying with a mini watermelon when darkness strikes. 

That mixture of the mundane and the supernatural is a persistent feature of Kate Atkinson’s writing, including her impressive novel Life after Life (which imagines a series of alternative lives for a woman who might just have ended up assassinating Hitler, and which won the Costa novel prize in 2013). But Alex Clark – a perceptive reviewer for The Guardian – noted that Kate Atkinson’s style works best when there is plenty of grit to counteract the whimsy.

Which it unfortunately fails to do in this collection of stories. As I continued reading Normal Rules I grew increasingly disenchanted. It all became just too fey and too whimsical, without enough substance or seriousness. In the final story, ‘What if?’, the protagonist Franklin reappears from a series of earlier stories – only here his life takes a different course to that which the earlier stories have charted and the narrative shoots off in a completely different direction. Kate Atkinson tells us that Franklin’s previous iteration was in fact not Franklin at all, but someone who looked like him. But if the author can play so fast and loose with her characters, why should the reader invest time and emotion in their stories? There is only so far whimsy will go.

Romesh Gunesekera’s Reef: all about Sri Lanka

Reef is a beautiful book, slim and spare. It tells the story of Triton, houseboy to Mister Salgado, who lives somewhere on the south coast of Sri Lanka. It was published in 1994, which is when I must have read it first, and I have always remembered it as something quite special. Thirty years on I have just re-read Reef and it still seemed magical.

Triton tells his own story from the vantage point of the future when he is living in London (we first see him on a petrol station forecourt, a sad contrast with the paradise of Sri Lanka) so there is every opportunity for him to give us the benefit of hindsight. But he avoids that temptation and stays within the mindset of his younger self. Mister Salgado and his house are Triton’s entire world and he dedicates himself to their maintenance. It is a compelling picture of a quietly serious paradise, a Garden of Eden.

But although Triton does not editorialise, the author develops a quietly allusive parable of changing times. We are not dealing here with the civil war which broke out in 1983 but with the violent Marxist student movement which preceded it in the 1970s and which allied extremist fundamentalism to appalling bloodshed. As the politics of the outside world impinges on paradise – ‘at the kade on the main road the talk was on the need for revolution, or for a return to traditional values’ – Mister Salgado’s paradise begins to spoil. The seductive Miss Nili moves in, allowing Triton to see her naked and flirting with an American friend of Mister Salgado. Mister Salgado neglects his study of the dying coral reef on the south coast, instead going out to endless parties, surrounded by a feckless crowd of hangers on. And then Miss Nili asks Triton to take her to the local fish market. She is expecting a picturesque outing, but they are met with ‘the clammy stench of fresh fish blood, guts, bile and brine cooking in the magnified heat’. A reef shark, still alive, is being hacked at with a cleaver. Outside, pieces of bleached white coral from the dying reef mark the parking lot. This is a paradise truly lost.

Then Mister Salgado’s oldest and truest friend is disappeared as the waves of political violence begin to rise; Miss Nili moves out; and Mister Salgado abandons his home and takes off for London – the dreary London of the 1970s – taking Triton with him. There they rebuild their lives but they are always looking back to what they have lost.

 One of the most moving aspects of this novel is that it mirrors the author’s own life. Romesh Gunesekera was born in what was then Ceylon in 1954 but left with his parents in 1966 and ended up in Britain. So his memories of Sri Lanka must be those of a child, and it is that point of view – where a house and a garden and the lane outside are a whole universe – that is one of the most magical elements of Reef.

Reef is quiet and understated. Romesh Gunesekera manages to walk the thin line between dealing with the terrible recent history of Sri Lanka, and making that story personal. It has a feel of parable, concise and pared down, but it is a parable of considerable delicacy.

           

Note

If you would like to know more about the dark history of Sri Lanka I recommend John Gimlette’s Elephant Complex, which will dispel any idea that Sri Lanka is some sort of India-lite.

Graham Swift’s Twelve Post-War Tales: looking back

Twelve Post-War Tales was given to me by my friend Paul, shortly before he died on Easter Sunday. You might imagine from this a soulful pushing of a precious volume into my hands but no, it wasn’t like that at all. ‘Do take it’, he said, ‘but I didn’t think much of it’.

But it is, nonetheless, relevant to death and memorialising since these stories are all works of memory, featuring characters thinking back into their past lives. Graham Swift was born in 1949 and many of these stories imagine childhoods during the Second World War or shortly thereafter, remembering a time which seems so very far from where we are now. A world where miners came home still filthy and needed a bath in the kitchen from which they would emerge, transformed from black into white. Where black US soldiers were objects of wonder, they seemed so strange.

 Graham Swift was a young writer when I was a young reader, so now of course he is a senior citizen of the authorial world. He is one of those authors with whom I have travelled through a reading life, and like him I am fascinated, now, by looking back to a past which seems like another country.

The stories work on associations made between one thing and another – they are expositions rather than forward-moving narratives starting with a question and ending with an answer. Perhaps that is why Paul didn’t rate them. But what wins me over are the voices that Graham Swift inhabits and brings to life, the voices of people looking at the strangeness of life, recognising it and turning it over and over, as it were, in their hands, reminding me, if I needed to be reminded, how much there is to it all.

So it’s a fine judgement or perhaps just a matter of taste, whether you will find these stories marvellously suggestive or just too insubstantial. I can understand Paul’s dismissal of them, but I am deeply sympathetic to Graham Swift’s stories as they follow the wandering thoughts of people who like me, and indeed like Paul, have reached a stage of life when looking back provides so much food for thought.

Note

See my review of Graham Swift’s Here We Are – you can find it in the index. My favourite Swift, however, is the novella Mothering Sunday, which I highly recommend (but which is not reviewed here).

Robert Harris’s Precipice: History isn’t story

So what is Precipice actually about? We have read the reviews, we have read the blurb on the back cover and so we know, or at least think we know, that it’s about the relationship between Asquith and the young, aristocratic Venetia Stanley as war breaks out in Europe in 1914.

But at a certain point I found myself asking who the hero/ine of Precipice actually was. Was it Asquith or was it Venetia Stanley? I wasn’t sure. Which led to a second question: was Precipice primarily about the outbreak of war or about a love affair? There were sections on the impending war, and then there were separate sections on the affair (quite possibly unconsummated) between Asquith and Venetia. But those two story strands never seemed to meet, and whereas the horribly inevitable progress to war was gripping, the relationship between Asquith and Venetia was dutiful and lacklustre – hardly the stuff of romance. The title doesn’t help either: it suggests that there is a precipice which someone might fall off but it’s remarkably non-specific, which makes me wonder if Robert Harris himself knew what the motor of his story was meant to be.

The two story strands do eventually come together – Robert Harris tells us that Asquith let himself and the country become embroiled in the disastrous Dardanelles campaign because he was too busy writing Venetia a billet doux when his cabinet colleagues were discussing affairs of state. As things go downhill militarily Asquith becomes increasingly obsessed with Venetia, who is alarmed and becomes determined to leave him – which she eventually does. The fall of Asquith’s government and the end of the affair also mark the end of the novel.

There are just two problems. Firstly, no one can claim this is history – according to Anne Perkins, who is writing a biography of Asquith’s daughter Violet and who has written a review of Precipice in The Literary Review. Although Asquith did have a ‘harem’ of young female friends, no one thinks that Venetia Stanley was quite as important to Asquith as Robert Harris makes out. The key letter to Venetia was written during a break in the Cabinet meeting in which the Dardanelles campaign was being debated, and not during it, as Robert Harris tells us. And Asquith’s failure to be an effective PM during this period was, according to Anne Perkins, down to the fact that he was better at peace than at war.

Which makes me ask – if the author is ready not merely to fill in history’s gaps, but to rewrite history and even to misrepresent it, that must surely be in pursuit of a really good story? Only neither Venetia nor Asquith ever come to life on the page. Perhaps character doesn’t really interest Robert Harris. Even the presumably invented Paul Deemer, a junior detective investigating discarded official telegrams which have been appearing by the roadside around London (Asquith has been showing them to Venetia and then casually tossing them out of the window of his moving car), is little more than a cipher to get us through the plot. He has no mother or father; no girlfriend or wife. There’s not even a male friend anywhere in sight; he works in lonely isolation without any colleagues. He has one brother who is shipped off to France to fight at the earliest opportunity; and the suggestion of an interest in Venetia’s lady’s maid, which is not pursued. There is nobody in Paul Deemer’s life to make him seem like a real or interesting person.

And the one moment in the novel where I sat up and began to pay attention, thinking that perhaps at last something interesting and of consequence was about to happen, was when Paul Deemer discovers that his boss is in cahoots with the proprietor of The Times, Lord Northcliffe (an enemy of Asquith), and is passing information uncovered by Deemer to him. Now something is going to happen, I thought. The shit is going to hit the fan. But no. The revelation is followed by – precisely nothing. It’s really most unsatisfactory.

 I have some doubts about using history as the basis for fiction – there is a real conflict of interest. But if Hilary Mantel did it, it must be possible. Robert Harris, unfortunately, doesn’t manage it, at least not here. 

Notes

If you are interested in the actual history of the outbreak of the First World War, I recommend the podcast The Rest is History, which has done a whole series on the lead-up to the war and has just started a new series on the course of the war itself. You might find it more gripping than Precipice.

I have also written about Robert Harris’s Act of Oblivion, and you can find my review here. As I say in that review, history isn’t exactly story, although Robert Harris makes a better attempt at turning the former into the latter in that novel than he does in Precipice.

Patmeena Sabit’s Good People and Ledia Xhoga’s Misinterpretation: immigrants in the USA

Good People is the story of the Sharaf family, Afghan immigrants to the US, and a tragedy which engulfs them – but is the tragedy just an accident or is it an honour killing? Misinterpretation is the story of an Albanian immigrant married to a native New Yorker.

It’s also a story about a clash between cultures (the clothes they wear! the way they behave!) and the difficulty of negotiating between two views of what constitutes normality (who is right?). But although the two novels should have so much in common, they feel like different creatures entirely.

As we begin (and even for the first fifty pages or so) Good People it is possible to work out that the story is about the Sharaf family, but we have no real idea where the story is going. Because the narrative consists of a series of testimonies from a whole variety of people – family friends, one investigative reporter (which might give us pause for thought, because why should the family have become a subject of interest for such a person?); the director of a tourist attraction at Niagara Falls, who has been piecing together CCTV footage (giving us further pause for thought, since this suggests that there might be a crime in here somewhere). But for at least those first fifty pages it’s not clear what has happened to which member of the family or in which direction the novel is taking us.

Despite or perhaps because of our confusion, this way of telling the story is incredibly effective, with gradual revelations carefully orchestrated as we are led along the path of the narrative. It also gives the immigrant Afghan community not only a voice, but a whole range of voices. Patmeena Sabit has said that she was moved to write about the subject of honour killings after a notorious case in Canada, when she was struck by the fact that none of the commentary on the case came from the Afghan community. So nothing is simple and nothing is obvious. It is never made clear whether the tragedy is an honour killing or just an accident – the awful thing, the author has said, was that such a thing should even be possible.

But as a result we don’t hear from Zorah, the young woman at the centre of the tragedy, and that didn’t help me believe in Zorah’s fall from grace. I couldn’t quite believe that she somehow hooked up with such an undesirable man and gave up everything – her family and her place in society – to be with him. We never see her weighing up the pros and cons of that relationship, and we don’t see how and why that relationship fails (which would have been quite something, to be there in Zorah’s head, as she realises that she has given up everything for someone worthless – what is she to do then?). The way that Patmeena Sabit has chosen to tell her story stops us from understanding Zorah’s motivations or living through her experiences since we only see her through other people’s eyes. And of course we don’t hear from her family (who might have instigated her death), or from anyone who knows what really happened.

In Misinterpretation the clash between cultures infects the marriage of our interpreter-protagonist and her husband Billy, who is a culturally privileged academic born and brought up in New York. She keeps being pulled towards helping people who because of their precarious circumstances and cultural differences seem to Billy to be decidedly dodgy.

That mismatch between cultures reminds me of living in Florence in the early eighties, where no one was able to see what was obvious to me – namely, that I was a serious and very nicely brought up middle-class girl. To them I was just another female foreigner – in other words, an unchaperoned young girl of probably dubious morals. We all depend on signals to indicate to others our social identity, but those signals often don’t travel well.

The sense of precariousness which hovers over our protagonist is not confined to immigrants. There’s also Helen, their elderly neighbour who is evicted for non-payment of maintenance fees – our protagonist realises that her erratic and weird behaviour came out of economic desperation. And there is Anna – the gifted violinist who is involved in a car accident which makes it unlikely that she will ever play again.

Good People is much more tightly written than Misinterpretation, which goes rather off the rails somewhere before the end, turning unexpectedly into something like a thriller. It is a real change of mood and tone. And then suddenly we leave the thriller behind and move onto a final section where the novel begins to focus on whether the narrator and Billy will stay together – or has it all been too much? It’s all rather odd. I read a review on a blog which put this down to genius. I’m not entirely convinced by that explanation, but I rather like the homemade approach to fiction. It’s like seeing the workings of the story exposed.

In contrast Good People Is so well put together that it felt less like a novel about the immigrant experience than a suspense novel which happens to be about an honour killing. But is that a bad thing? Am I just being picky?

Good People is great – great in the way that a Hollywood blockbuster is great: with plenty of suspense, cliffhangers and carefully timed revelations. I was riveted, but whenever I put it down and the spell was temporarily broken I kept wondering if something wasn’t missing. Because it wasn’t great in the way an indie film can be great, moving with infinitesimal slowness and great beauty, so that you are not sure whether you are bored or fascinated, and you can’t quite work out what is going on and don’t know if it’s you or the film that is at fault. Which was what Ledia Xhoga’s Misinterpretation felt like.

A note on precarity

Precarity is a word which I encountered in reviews of Misinterpretation. But whatever happened to precariousness? Which does have rather more syllables, but which is a perfectly good word. It’s a bit like comic suddenly giving way to its more happening cousin, comedic. Which I really have no time for.  People are rushing forward into the future, forgetting all the words which I have always used and which have always seemed perfectly serviceable.

 But Wikipedia (I looked it up because I was so bemused) tells us that the word precarity derives from the French précarité, which was popularised by Pierre Bourdieu (and if you don’t know who he is, Wikipedia will be happy to fill you in) and which describes a lack of stable and predictable employment. English-speaking (or writing) academics started to use the term in the 2010s and I suppose that reviewers must have caught it from them – or made use of the word to make their reviews seem more deep, meaningful and important.

There is, apparently, even a noun – precariat – which is a mix of precarity and proletariat. I love it. But whether it is precarity or precariousness, it is definitely Xhoga’s subject in Misinterpretation.

William Boyd, Gabriel’s Moon: Lights! Camera! Action!

Lights! Camera! Action! And we’re off.

This is a story (yes, an actual story and not just a novel) where stuff happens and where people (let’s not call them characters) make split second decisions that determine their safety and security and, on occasion, whether they will live or die. Yes, it’s a spy story. It’s gripping, plot-based stuff, and I feel as though I am in the hands of someone who knows precisely what they are doing. Which William Boyd obviously does, because he has been doing this and doing it very well for a long time.

The plot isn’t singular, but multiple, and the question is – how does everything relate? It all begins in 1960 on a hot, humid August day in Léopoldville, the capital of the newly independent republic of the Congo. Gabriel Dax is there not as a spy but as a travel writer. To his surprise he is summoned to the presidential residence to conduct an interview with Patrice Lumumba – shortly before he is disappeared. Back in London he is invited by the representatives of the ‘Institute of Development’ to act as a courier for them. But why does his brother lie to him about his own involvement with the secret services? It’s the sort of plot which feels complicated, but I could just about keep on top of all the questions which I wanted to ask, even if I couldn’t work out the answers – and for me that constituted a very satisfactory level of complication.

Patrice Lumumba is not, of course, a fictional character – he and his disappearance are not fiction, but history. And the places which William Boyd takes us to are entirely real.  As Gabriel, at the beginning of the novel, looks from Léopoldville across the Congo river, he sees Brazzaville on the far bank – and I recalled that I had read Boyd’s Brazzaville Beach years ago. These locations recur in Boyd’s fiction because he was born in Africa (Ghana, to be precise), so these places aren’t just place-holders for exoticism. Gabriel leaves Léopoldville to travel to Cadiz in Franco’s Spain and then to Warsaw, in the days when it was still behind the Iron Curtain. The foreign countries which William Boyd takes us too include the foreign country of the past, a country which people his and my age know well, but which it is good to be reminded of.

My only complaint relates to the hook on which Gabriel’s career as a spy hangs – his attraction to Faith Green, the head of the ‘Institute of Development’. It’s that attraction which keeps him going back for more, despite the dangers which his involvement brings. But to me the attraction did not seem sufficiently compelling. Perhaps that is down to William Boyd’s other existence as a screen writer – perhaps he imagines that the older Faith Green resembles the mother who died in a mysterious house fire when Gabriel was a child. But that is a resemblance which is never made clear on the pages of the novel, although it could be compelling on screen – a resemblance not stated but left for us to see for ourselves.

But despite that, more than one reviewer commented with surprise that the overwhelming sensation that they felt while reading Gabriel’s Moon was enjoyment. As if whether the reviewer actually enjoyed a novel wasn’t a question that they generally even thought to ask. I suspect that a reason for their (and my) enjoyment is the fact that Gabriel has real agency in his own story – like an actor who improvises as he goes along – and it was all bracing stuff, and perhaps an encouragement to us all to treat our own lives with the same degree of sang froid and determination.

Note

And see how things interconnect: I have just discovered that William Boyd wrote the screenplay for the film of Joyce Cary’s Mister Johnson which came out in 1990. (My review of Mister Johnson is here: Joyce Cary, Mister Johnson)

And my review of William Boyd’s Trio is here:   William Boyd, Trio

Joyce Cary’s Herself Surprised: perhaps first person narrations aren’t always a good thing

Here I am, talking about the passage of time again. Joyce Cary was once a celebrated writer. Doris Lessing, Iris Murdoch and Elizabeth Bowen all praised his novels; he appeared on the front cover of Time magazine; and was featured in the Paris Review. But that was a long time ago. He died in 1957, a few months before I was born, and his novels have become increasingly difficult to get hold of. So I took note when I saw in The Literary Review that Everyman are republishing a trilogy written during the Second World War. I must admit that I couldn’t quite face the thought of (literally) picking up a hardback volume into which three novels had been compressed, but its publication did spur me to find an old orange Penguin of the first part of the trilogy, Herself Surprised.

Cary designed the trilogy as an attempt to show three characters both as they are seen by themselves but also as they are seen by each other. So the three novels are all in the first person, the first being narrated by Sara Monday, a cook turned lady turned housekeeper who finally ends up with a prison sentence for fraud, which is the point at which we meet her at the beginning of the novel. Sara Monday is a character in every sense of the word and her life is a roller coaster.

Herself Surprised was published in 1941, only two years after Mister Johnson, which I first read when I was at school and which I continue to regard as one of the most luminous novels ever written(there is a link to my review of Mister Johnson below). It is the story, as Cary himself put it, of an African clerk who turns his life into a romance and creates for himself a glorious destiny. Despite the fact that Herself Surprised opens in Victorian England and Mister Johnson is set in twentieth century Africa, the novels both deal with the downfall of a person who is in many respects entirely admirable and indeed heroic in their positive attitude to life in the face of obstacles and setbacks: in the end both Mister Johnson and Sara Monday become victims of the legal system and of censorious society.

But I must admit that despite the similarities with Mister Johnson I found Herself Surprised a bit of a disappointment. It felt dull and it felt dated. Whereas Mister Johnson has for me a real sense of immediacy, Herself Surprised seemed strangely old fashioned,. so despite being closer to home than Mister Johnson it somehow felt further away, more distant to now. Perhaps it’s because class plays what now seems an unwarranted role – Sara marries above her station and struggles to adapt in a way which now seems incredible.

But perhaps something else is going on which could account for my disappointment. Mister Johnson is written in the present tense and Herself Surprised is written in the first person. Both of these ‘minimise the opportunity for reflection and explanation. So we are shown events, and characters are paraded before us, but we are left to make our own judgements’, as I wrote about Mister Johnson. But although a first person narration can bring immediacy it can also become a prison for the author from which he can’t escape. If Cary wants us to learn anything about Sara’s character he has to slip it into her monologue – she has to unwittingly reveal character traits that are perhaps not intended to be obvious to her herself. Which ends up, as you can imagine, feeling decidedly clunky.

And a related problem is that the novel has an awful lot of summary. Sara is telling us the story of her life, starting (almost) at the beginning and ending somewhere near the end (or at least at the point where she ends up in prison). And summary does tend to be relentless and boring: it too often remains in the realm of the general rather than the specific. It’s onlywhen the story of Sara’s life speeds up towards the end and the summary accelerates that I became more engaged by the narrative – and by the story of an inimitable woman.

I feel that this review should have ended on a note of triumph, that I should be able to tell you that Herself Surprised is a masterpiece which reinforces and vindicates my love of Cary’s Mister Johnson. But for me, at least, Herself Surprised is not a masterpiece. It is certainly interesting, and there are some marvellous moments. And it’s lovely to hold in my hands an ancient paperback, so ancient that it is actually stitched rather than glued together. But it does not feel like a work of genius. What a sadness.

Note

My review of Joyce Cary’s Mister Johnson is here: Joyce Cary, Mister Johnson.

Tash Aw’s The Harmony Silk factory: intriguing complexity?

I have been interested in colonial Malaya, as it then was, since my father did his National Service there back in the early 1950s, teaching English to Gurkha troops during the guerrilla war between Communist pro-independence fighters and the British. He described ending up in a hill station in the centre of the country and only feeling safe in the company of the Gurkhas who would gather around him in the evening, wanting to hear stories of double decker buses and cinemas in Birmingham – the mystery of the West (as opposed to the Orient), I suppose. He also ate with the Gurkhas, and said that they were dreadful cooks, although entirely marvellous in every other respect. When he left to go back home on the SS Empire Windrush (yes, that Windrush) they presented him with a curved kukri which is still with me in my sock drawer. Apparently kukris are useful for decapitating chickens (as a prelude for making curry in a dustbin), but I haven’t tried that yet.

But the ‘Emergency’, as it was called,  is not the subject of The Harmony Silk Factory – its focus is on the period of the imminent Japanese invasion in 1941 and, more particularly, on the difficult and not straightforward choices which that forced upon people. It was Tash Aw’s first novel, written back in 2005, and it won the Whitbread (which became the Costa and is now the Nero) First Novel Award. He has said that he wrote it because there wasn’t much written about Malaysia, but he has gone on to remedy that, since Malaysia has provided the focus for all his subsequent writing.

The period which he is writing about in The Harmony Silk Factory is one of ambiguity, and that ambiguity is reflected in the way Tash Aw tells his story, with three narrators. Reviewers suggest that they all give different versions of the same story, but that’s a lazy over-simplification. What they are in fact doing is to tell stories which happen to overlap. The purpose and focus of each of their individual stories is different; the historical moments in which their various testimonies are written also differ; and the timeframe which their stories cover are all different too. The end result is to maximise the sense of ambiguity, as if you are seeing the world which they describe through a series of lenses, none of which have the correct prescription for you, the reader. It is an odd sensation. The Guardian described this as a simple case of ‘unreliable narration’. But it’s not so much unreliable as partial and subjective, and designed to suggest that history is unknowable.

What is the subject of this unreliable narration? The first testimony comes from Jasper, who is determined to investigate the life of his father, ‘the infamous Chinaman called Johnny’, whom he describes as ‘a liar, a cheat, a traitor and a skirt-chaser. Of the very highest order’. In a life of dodgy dealings Johnny’s worst moment, his son claims, is when he betrayed his Communist Party comrades to the Japanese during their occupation of the peninsula. Jasper pieces his story together from multiple historical records – he was not, of course, around to witness much of his father’s life.

The second testimony comes from Snow, Jasper’s mother and Johnny’s (rather improbable) wife, who died on the day that Jasper was born. Whereas Johnny was a chancer with a dubious background (at least according to his son) Snow Soong came from a well-to-do family. It is not clear why she married Johnny. Did she take a fancy to him? Or did her family pressure her into taking him? Accounts differ. Snow’s testimony is entitled simply 1941 and consists of diary entries covering two months in that year, when she is married to Johnny but has fallen in love with Mamoru Kunichika, apparently a Japanese academic recently arrived in Malaya, but who after the invasion becomes the head of the Kempeitai (the Japanese secret police). The date given to this section is significant – in 1941 the Japanese had invaded Siam and were contemplating extending their reach down the Malaysian peninsula. You can feel the political background simmering away, although Snow does not seem aware of it. Why does a woman selling fruit suddenly appear on a deserted road through the jungle? Why does Kunichika want to get off that road so quickly? Why does Kunichika ask Snow leading questions about Johnny? But Snow ignores all that, just as she ignores the question of who Johnny really is. Instead her focus is on love, romance and Kunichika.

The final testimony is that of Peter Wormwood, who came across Johnny in Singapore before the war. He is writing in a care home somewhere in what has become Malaysia – he has never returned to Britain. He tells how he came to Singapore, fascinated by the idea of the Orient, and found Johnny reading Shelley in a bar. It’s a totally different picture of Johnny to that given to us by his son Jasper, who portrays him as a hard-bitten wheeler dealer without morals or scruples. But Peter’s narrative does not focus on Johnny – his focus as he writes in his care home is on the creation of a garden, and his historical focus back when he knew Johnny is on Snow, with whom he has fallen in love. His narrative ends with the revelation of who Jasper’s real father is – we have been led to suspect that it might be Kunichika and not Johnny. And that revelation gives shape to the novel, returning us to Jasper, with whom we had begun.

So the novel feels in one sense like the story of a love triangle (or is it a square, with four participants?), with Snow married to Johnny but pursuing Kunichika and being pursued by Peter. In another sense it is a historical and political story, set in the lead-up to the Japanese invasion of the Malaysian peninsula and complete with representative Chinese, Malay, English and Japanese characters. The story of Johnny’s betrayal of his Communist comrades is based on the very real massacre which took place in the Batu Caves in 1941, and there is a real sense of the wheels of politics and history whirring away as our characters concern themselves with matters of the heart.

Tash Aw has said that ‘I wanted to challenge myself to create a complex storyline that would take as much time to unravel as it would to create’. And he succeeds – there are multiple layers of complexity here. Is our concern love or is it politics and war? Is the focus really on understanding Johnny and on uncovering who he really was? Or is that just one among many concerns?

Even the author seems to feel that the complexity of his narrative is too much at times. Jasper’s narration occasionally becomes suspiciously omniscient, including dialogue which took place before Jasper was even born. And later, Peter seems to remember verbatim the words, spoken decades earlier, of Frederick Honey, a tin mine manager who accompanies Snow and Johnny on a strange trip which also included Kunichika and Peter Wormwood. Honey seems to have no obvious part in the plot but to be there solely to reveal to Peter (and so to the reader) what the trip is all about. Cutting through all the mysterious complexity Honey tells Peter that Snow is there ‘as bait for the Professor (Kunichika), who may or may not rise to accept this tasty morsel. He’s only interested in Johnny, that filthy commie guerrilla. The whole trip’s been arranged so that Kunichika can become best chums with his soon-to-be chief informer’. That moment took me aback. It felt as though a tasteful veil had been ripped away and the basic thrust of the novel laid bare in its most simple terms. Honey ends up dead shortly afterwards – and I can’t help thinking that it was the author who did it, since Honey’s narrative purpose had been achieved.

The potential problem is that you might feel that it isn’t really clear what the novel is about or where it is going. And although it ends with the revelation of Jasper’s true paternity it doesn’t feel as if the novel’s purpose from the beginning has been to follow a path towards making that discovery. The problem with complexity, perhaps, is that intriguing complication can become a messy and incomprehensible tangle. But for myself I enjoyed the ride – reading a novel which made the act of reading a conscious act requiring thought and consideration. it also made me realise that there might be more than one way of looking at the Malayan Emergency in which my father played a small (and very pacific) part as a sergeant in the Education Corps.

Note

If you want to read more fiction set in Malaysia try:

Anthony Burgess, A Malayan Trilogy, set in post-independence Malaya

Joseph Conrad, Lord Jim

Somerset Maugham, The Casuarina Tree

J G Farrell, The Singapore Grip, which covers the Japanese invasion

Leslie Thomas, Virgin Soldiers, which is written from the point of view of a British soldier during the Emergency

And more recently, Tan Twan Eng, The Garden of Evening Mists, and other subsequent novels.

Jane Gardam’s The Flight of the Maidens: unexpected and amazing

The Flight of the Maidens was on my reading list since it is our book club choice for this month, but when I looked on my bookshelves I discovered that it was already there, although I couldn’t remember having read it. I looked through my list of all the books I have read, which goes back more than ten years – but it wasn’t there. My paperback edition was published in 2001, but there is a pencilled £1.99 on the inside cover which shows that it must have been bought second hand. So I would have read it some time between the early 2000s and 2015, although I still can’t remember doing so. Memory! The passage of time! Which is why I now write about the books I read – it makes me think about them and makes me give shape to my thoughts. So hopefully in twenty years’ time I will remember The Flight of the Maidens – which will be a thoroughly good thing, since it is well worth remembering.

I have always thought of Jane Gardam as a novelist belonging to a slightly older generation than my own, a writer who was a fixture when I first began reading grown-up novels (and when a female novelist might be referred to as a lady novelist, which is how I automatically think of Jane Gardam). You grow up surrounded by certain writers of whom you are always aware. And then of course they either stop writing, as Julian Barnes has just declared he will do, or – even worse – die, and you discover that at some point the novels being published and reviewed are being written by different, new people, people noticeably younger than yourself, and who have concerns and a cultural background that you may well not share. Literature – novels – are all products of their time, as are their readers.

I have looked Jane Gardam up and see that she was born in 1928 and died just last year, in 2025. So she doesn’t belong to my generation at all, but to my parents’ generation. In fact she would have been of a generation with her heroines in The Flight of the Maidens, and like them she won a scholarship to study at university – in her case to Bedford College, then part of the University of London. When she wrote about them their story, set in 1946, was already long past, a part of history. Writing The Flight of the Maidens must have felt like an act of recuperation, the recovery of the world of her youth. So perhaps both reading and writing are all about the passage of time, about remembering what might otherwise be forgotten.

The Flight of the Maidens begins with three girls, Una, Hetty and Lieselotte, in a graveyard somewhere in Yorkshire, all celebrating their success in getting university places (which in 1946, when it is set, must have been quite something). What a way to begin! It made me instantly think of beginnings and endings and everything that might happen in between – indeed, the story of an entire life or in this case, three lives. But then something unexpected happens. You might presume, given the opening, that this is going to be the story of a three-way friendship, but instead the three girls go their separate ways. Hetty goes to the Lake District for what she imagines will be a serious attempt to get through her university reading list; Una goes off youth hostelling with her young (and lower class and very left-wing) man; and Lieselotte, a Jewish refugee who had arrived on the Kindertransport, disappears first to London where she stays briefly with elderly refugees in a basement flat in Notting Hill and then to, of all places, California, where a long lost aunt has been discovered.

The novel unfolds by dropping us into scene after scene from the three girls’ lives, a sequence of tantalising glimpses into their summer between school and university. It is a summer in which they are ejected from their childhood into the new post-war world. So The Flight of the Maidens is not just about three schoolgirls – it’s about war and peace and politics and society. Una’s young man is incensed that although Una is going to study physics at Cambridge she hasn’t stopped to think about the implications of the atomic bombs which have just been dropped on Japan. In the Lake District Hetty meets the upper-class Fitzurse family who provide a window onto a world of class and privilege, although neither has protected its members from the damage inflicted by the war. And Lieselotte is awoken from the dream of her temporarily English childhood (‘six years of anonymity and invisibility’ that had wrapped her around like a blanket) when a chandelier in the Feldmans’ flat in Notting Hill explodes one night, the sound of breaking glass forcing her to remember Kristallnacht and to come to terms with what has undoubtedly happened to her parents.   

 It’s the variety of their experiences and their locations that is breathtaking, from youth hostelling in the Yorkshire Dales to California, with its wide view of the Pacific Ocean to post-war Notting Hill (far less salubrious than it is now – even when I first knew it in the early eighties it was only partly gentrified). Only at the end of the novel are the girls reunited as they set off to university, Lieselotte having escaped from her gilded cage in California.  

I loved The Flight of the Maidens for the way in which it sent its female protagonists off into the most unexpected places where they have the strangest of encounters. It’s as if Jane Gardam is thinking back to her own youth, and sending her heroines out, like Eric Newby, to a new world of adventure and possibility – not a safe or predictable world, but then adventure is never safe or predictable. It’s bracing stuff, not quite what I had expected, but an entirely good thing.  

Lily King’s Writers & Lovers: too much like a Netflix drama

I saw Lily King’s latest novel, Heart the Lover, written up admiringly in the Guardian. It was an ecstatic review, the sort of review that can’t be ignored and which invites the reader (me) to rush out and purchase the book instantly. But since the reviewer described the novel as both a prequel and a sequel to her earlier Writers & Lovers I thought I should read that novel first – which is why we are here now. But I don’t quite know what to make of it. I read it very happily, but can’t help feeling that it’s the literary equivalent of a meringue – tempting but lacking in substance.

Our heroine Casey lives in Boston. She is impecunious, making ends meet by waitressing in an up-scale restaurant while trying to write a novel. She is adrift in the world – her mother has died suddenly; she has lost touch with her undesirable father; and she is romantically unattached. Then she meets two men – an older established writer with a beautiful house and two young sons, and Silas, younger, more spontaneous, but apparently less reliable. The novel becomes a question of which man she will choose. 

Casey is one of those heroines whom I tend to find particularly annoying – an educated but underassertive and underachieving young woman at the mercy of life (unlike the young Eric Newby, I can’t help thinking wistfully, who had an admirably can-do approach to adversity). To add to that we are expected to feel sorry for Casey because of her mother’s recent death, which I can’t help regarding rather resentfully – as though the author, by killing off Casey’s mother, had leant heavily on the scales of our sympathy, forcing us into an emotional reaction which she hasn’t earned.

 Nevertheless there is some good stuff here, authentically observed, about the writing process and even more about Casey’s job as a waitress. It’s genuinely quite refreshing, and reminded me how little focus there generally is in novels about the mundane things that takes up most of most people’s time – like paid employment.

 But the narrative seemed to walk a knife edge – sometimes with moments which made me feel yes! and then others where the author relapsed into the safe haven of convention. Some reviewers put this down to the novel becoming a sort of rom com, but I’m not convinced that making a decision between two men has to feel fluffy and lightweight. It’s more as if the author decides from time to time that she is going to run on autopilot.

There are the two small sons of one of Casey’s suitors, who are improbably sweet and lovely. But whoever knew a child (or indeed any person) to behave with complete consistency, and what child would look favourably on their father taking up with a new woman after their mother’s death?

And neither am I happy about the job which Casey lands as a teacher at the end of the novel, and not just because it seems like an improbably happy ending. It is the nature of that improbably happy ending – the school hugs her with a warm embrace, as though they were all mother-substitutes or her shrink. The pupils are all cute and understanding and impossibly civilised. (I tried teaching once and I really can’t imagine children behaving as Lily King makes them behave.)

Is my problem with Writers & Lovers at least in part down to the fact that it’s American? Which isn’t to do with its intrinsic worth, but more to do with its appeal to me. I have spent most of my reading life assuming that American fiction and British fiction are interchangeable. Because aren’t they, after all, written in the same language? But the world of Writers & Lovers is not my world. I shouldn’t expect to pick up a novel set in Boston and written by an American writer and imagine that it will reflect life as I live it.  

Perhaps the best way to describe my feelings about Writers & Lovers is to say that it is like watching a very competent US drama – somehow just a bit slick, as if it is wearing a layer of foundation which irons out all the rough edges. What it lacks, too often, is authenticity. I must also remind myself not to trust ecstatic reviews – that was how I ended up reading Eric Puchner’s Dream State – which I found similarly underwhelming. But then that was an American novel too.

Notes

Eric Newby’s can-do approach to life is displayed in The Last Grain Race. My review is here: Eric Newby, The Last Grain Race.

My review of Eric Puchner’s Dream State is here: Eric Puchner, Dream State.